Lachi's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electron]

Everything I already told you. Just to recap

• Synth at mid track (2.20 about) sounds a bit dirty
• I like the pads and overall the sounds
• Nice buildup at the start, though I would have preferred a more powerful bass
• Overall nice track

ForeverBound responds:

Thanks man I appreciate your review

[The Tomb Shaker]

STEP BLOWS IT AGAIN
HOLY SHEET

1:45 my knees exploded
Liked the atmosphere, more action than the other too ambient
GG 5

Step responds:

Aw yeahhhh. Thanks for the review! And sorry about your knees. c:

[Run]

The good ol "first song on fl studio" submission, lol

I was going to say, at a certain point: "the drums are too repetitive" then the clap/snare came in, nice
I don't like how it ended, and the melody was generic for my tastes (generic as in nothing too interesting, maybe with a different aggressive lead or another type of sound it could be interesting)

Next time add more variety, around 0:50 I was waiting for something more to come, maybe some variation in the drums (before adding the claps), maybe a change in the melody or in the sounds, maybe something else lol I don't know

WELL GG CYA

SolarFloss responds:

Thanks. I'll keep that in mind!

[Flipping]

it's not really that much scary, some sounds are too bright.
it fits good as an ambient/chill out song but not really scary or creepy at all.

good job anyway, 3.

ps: you got a pm

eatmeatleet responds:

yeah thanks for inoput nmot really that scary, cannot define it really maybe thats why people dont like it too much

[Industrious Terrestrial]

Agree with this guy down here.
0:40 it's a lot of things, I don't know but it feel weird, not natural
Nice pause at 1:14, the synth could have a little more power (the first one after the pause), something that will make it unique?

Overall nice atmosphere throughout all the song, could have been better. Nothing really "truely awesome" but good job, just saw your post on that review thread and thought I could review someone. good luck dude

alternativesolution responds:

Thank you for taking the time to listen and review :)
I will keep the "busyness" critique in mind for the future.

[Frootza - Phantom]

I really like the melody that starts at 0:07.
0:50 is awesome too, I like how the melody fits in it.

I think you need a "break", a "pause" somewhere near 1:10, because my ears got bored there. Hopefully you got a cool one at 1:40 =)

This is not my genre (too many synths and things going on, lol), so I can't really give some constructive criticism. But I really enjoyed the final 2:50.

3,5!

frootza responds:

Glad that even though its not your style you enjoyed it!

frootza

[Lily of the Valley]

Calm and relaxing. I think you succeded in what you wanted to do pretty well.
Just some things: sometimes you hear claps, they don't fit well in SOME PARTS of the song, also the kick at 2:25 is not good.

As a videogame loop, this surely deserves 4,5. These things I said are my opinions Soully, the rest is just awesome! let me know!

SoulofT responds:

I think the claps might be loud at some parts. And I guess shouldn't have put that cutoff on that kick ... 0_0
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

[Mr.DMA]

Cool track.
From 0:40 that little synth could be done better IMO! It needs some work.
The melody is cool and happy, good thing here.

The progression is nice, I'll give this a 3,5 but it could be higher ;)
The ending is too plain, just a fade out... don't know.

Keep working

Synthapse responds:

Thanks for the review! helpful points

[Clockwork Calamity]

Cool shit man!
Transitions are very well done: check out that at 1:55.

Nothing to say on the technical part: sounds are clean and frenquencies too. I like that drop at 0:53. Piano is good, main melody is nothing exceptional (not saying it's bad), good job on this.

Voted 4,5!

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thanks for the review:]
Glad you thought it was cool^^

[The Time Machine]

Nice loop you have here man.
It really has a feel from another world: I see this on a futuristic game or something really complex.

Good stuff, nothing to say on the technical part: sounds are good and the loop has a good flow, I could listen to this for twenty consecutive minutes.

Giving a 4,5, if only it lasted longer!

(Btw: where are you from?)

Genclops responds:

I had forgotten all about this song! Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it. I agree I should have made it a bit longer in retrospect.