Everything I already told you. Just to recap
• Synth at mid track (2.20 about) sounds a bit dirty
• I like the pads and overall the sounds
• Nice buildup at the start, though I would have preferred a more powerful bass
• Overall nice track
Thanks man I appreciate your review
STEP BLOWS IT AGAIN
1:45 my knees exploded
Liked the atmosphere, more action than the other too ambient
Aw yeahhhh. Thanks for the review! And sorry about your knees. c:
Part One - The Tribes
Well holy fuck. The drums and the percussion really makes this song great. Those were the first instruments ever used, you did some great work here. The little "flute" also works too, the volume is at the "most right point" lol.
Part Two - Building Begins
More instruments coming. More than a part, I'd count this as a big buildup for the next part, the most awesome one, coming in at 1.30 circa and on
Part Three - Kings and Queens
Medieval feeling, this is the greatest part. After the guitar instrument (liute?), the choirs are very gorgeous. The "piano" also fits in this entire part at the end, and it adds that little touch that makes the song "sweet".
Part Four - Dawn of Technology
Can't really say anything here. Not my sounds.
Part Five - Inventing New Realities
Same as above.
Part Six - Ages Past
A return to the past, and very well done. I didn't read the first time, but I was excepting that the introduction drums were going to come up again. Felt very satisfied :=)
Part Seven - Preparing for LHC
Intense and build up! Very well done, too bad that ->
Part Eight - Into the Deep Void
The ending lasts too long, and it obscured the big badass buildup you made in the part before. Don't know if you get what i mean.
Great song, would pirate it lol
Like that it is more as an adventure rather than a song, gratz.
It's just a test
Try to make a song wasting lots of time on front of your pc
Nothing to review here, melody is nothing exceptional
The start reminded me about Men in Black? lol
Btw add a name to the loop man, "loopity loop loop" is ok but isn't really a name (?)
Also, it isn't a loop, it doesn't catch itself after it finishes.
Well, at least I like the little melody
The good ol "first song on fl studio" submission, lol
I was going to say, at a certain point: "the drums are too repetitive" then the clap/snare came in, nice
I don't like how it ended, and the melody was generic for my tastes (generic as in nothing too interesting, maybe with a different aggressive lead or another type of sound it could be interesting)
Next time add more variety, around 0:50 I was waiting for something more to come, maybe some variation in the drums (before adding the claps), maybe a change in the melody or in the sounds, maybe something else lol I don't know
WELL GG CYA
Thanks. I'll keep that in mind!
it's not really that much scary, some sounds are too bright.
it fits good as an ambient/chill out song but not really scary or creepy at all.
good job anyway, 3.
ps: you got a pm
yeah thanks for inoput nmot really that scary, cannot define it really maybe thats why people dont like it too much
Agree with this guy down here.
0:40 it's a lot of things, I don't know but it feel weird, not natural
Nice pause at 1:14, the synth could have a little more power (the first one after the pause), something that will make it unique?
Overall nice atmosphere throughout all the song, could have been better. Nothing really "truely awesome" but good job, just saw your post on that review thread and thought I could review someone. good luck dude
Thank you for taking the time to listen and review :)
I will keep the "busyness" critique in mind for the future.
What. You created all the sounds?
Being a "first track", this is awesome. The sounds are very good. I'm not into hard-whatever, so I don't know about the structure and such, but as I said and repeat good job. Downloading now :)
I really like the melody that starts at 0:07.
0:50 is awesome too, I like how the melody fits in it.
I think you need a "break", a "pause" somewhere near 1:10, because my ears got bored there. Hopefully you got a cool one at 1:40 =)
This is not my genre (too many synths and things going on, lol), so I can't really give some constructive criticism. But I really enjoyed the final 2:50.
Glad that even though its not your style you enjoyed it!
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